A Romantic Comedy (lyrics by surfer) redone

John

Thanks for the listen.

Just have. :mrgreen: New version upped.

Lyrics

She said “Call me Veronica
you can be Archie
that’s good enough
for your wants and my needs.”

I said “I’d rather be Batman
even though I’m a fat man
I fancy myself
a dark knight in this land.”

We’re a couple of comics
long out of fashion
but willing to fake it
for a moment of passion

Strangers in primary
colors and boxes
telling short stories
quickly forgotten

No thousand page romance
with tension filled dances
and detailed histories
of meaningful glances

No need for high art
to get dirty and low
a cheap motel laugh
and then we’ll go

We’re a couple of comics
long out of fashion
but willing to fake it
for a moment of passion

Strangers in primary
colors and boxes
telling short stories
quickly forgotten

You’re a good lad, and I’m paying attention. :wink:

I reckon you could shave a whisker off both tops (vocals) and bottoms (kick) of this mix.

checkin out the new mix dave, I’m hearin damn close to perfection. great job on the vocals. strangely I feel like an ale, lol.

Now perfect. :sunglasses:

You know, I was getting frustrated with this mix. It wasn’t quite happening for me and I nearly deleted it. I tried what you said and took the top edge off some of the guitars and I think it gels much better. Thanks

Bob and Dave, thanks for stopping by again, much appreciated. :slight_smile:

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