First post on here after jumping ship from Ableton two years ago … thanks for all the anonymous forum help during the time I’ve been lurking on here 
This is ‘Be Whatever: A Song for Joe’. I’m reasonably confident about the song, less so about my demo production. I think I’ve probably taken it as far as I can with my own limited capabilities and equipment, so I have put it out there to try and generate some interest, and hopefully get someone to pick up on it and take it a step further.
I’d like to know what the forum think about the treatment: too old school? not old school enough? Are the vocals interesting, or should I concentrate on selling the song and giving up the singing career? 
All these Qs and more …
Thanks in advance for your comments, constructive or otherwise.