Some things:
The guitar seems out of tune.
The snare has some high-pitched noise to it, almost like a tambourine is hit together with it. I’m not fond of it myself.
Vocals are very good again though, good work on that!
Mix sounds a bit murky to me, pan the guitars right and left. Some unwanted rumble from the bass too that needs taming. Snare sounds over-compressed but you may get away with that when the mix is clearer. Rest of the song sounds fine
What sav said. Also, the vocals could use some cuts in the high frequencies, ‘s’ sounds are a bit too loud currently. Drums are spot on in my opinion, the bass could maybe come up a little as well, it’s a bit undefined at the moment.
Now I have rerecorded all the guitars. It was a dist guitar and my acoustic guitar that was out of tune. Also put a deesser on all the vocals adn brought up the bass a little.