It’s working here now.
It’s a beautiful little piece. I can understand the temptation to present it as one of those album interludes between big tracks, but I hear a lot of potential in it for more.
First of all, the guitar and voice is creamy and heart-rending, and I would like to understand what you’re doing to make that guitar and voice fill the stereo field without a ton of reverb. I really admire the way the harmony sort of floats into the background.
As we get near the end, I’m expecting or envisioning a build-up with drums, bass, and of course, your lap-steel, maybe keys, to take it up a notch, to punch home the message of longing (if I may be so presumptuous), with a lap-steel solo. I guess you already thought of this.
Now I have to look for a Vibro Champ!
Anyway, I love it.