You did something wrong with increasing the loudness, the track is clipping regularly.
It’s an interesting song though, I quite like it.
The piano I really had to get used to, I really like piano, mostly because it has very nice resonance, but you’re only playing single staccato notes so I’m missing that.
The change to the outtro was a bit sudden, it also sounded more electronic and less acoustic, more like a new song idea than a nice closure to this particular track.
As mentioned there is some room for improvement in the mix too. But I don’t want to sound too negative, because you have some cool ideas and creative, ‘not the norm’ progressions. That’s good, you should keep that, it makes your tracks very interesting to listen to