needs a little work so deleted for now…
yes beautiful, perfect for that quiet gazing. last year at the end of the season I finally cut a tree down at my summer place that was blocking the sky at night. up there away from the city the stars are so much more visable, I can’t wait to do that this year. I was thinking about that as I listened. very cool, I liked the little progression down, was a nice touch.
yeh that is a realy nice feel ,can hear some nice trippy vocals in there.
Cool. Not sure about the size of that reverb though. Does a guitar resonate so much under the stars round there?
Good work though 
Cheers
Phil
NIce playing, sounds good.
I agree with Phil about the reverb though.
Cheers,
Wim
I also think that 'verb is too big and although it sets up some
nice incidental flutter that almost sounds like padded percussion it
makes the bottom end a bit murky.
But a nice piece!
Jet
It’s almost like your trying to tell me something here 
Seriously though nice one guys. Thx for all your kind words and advice. Now this reverb issue has been raised i cant hear anything else, so im gonna give it some tweaking and perhaps give this a second run through here. Really appreciate your time and comments though.
nice one!
Something to try is to use a delay with just a little bit of reverb. The echoes are great for creating that mystical sound but a reverb is like an infinite number of echoes and very quickly becomes noisy. The delay effect can create a few discreet echoes and clean up the ambience a lot.
J.L.