This song has a lot of potential, but you missed a very huge opportunity: the song has far too much of it in the center channel rather than do some really nice things with the stereo field. I realize you do have some things like the ping-pong “water washing” effect in the middle. But you could duplication / detune the main bass line and pan one hard left and the other hard right if nothing else. Automation on the panning of those tracks could get interesting, etc.
There was something to this; I listened to it twice. Lots of power.
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