Feedback on new track??

Steinberg Lounge
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Hey guys! The voxx are scratch one take on crappy $49 mic through line six an i have a cold. Want feedback on how the lyrics and melody flow before i burn for real. Thanks all!!

http://soundcloud.com/brettbuchananmusic/desparate-man-scratch-vocals

BretT

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Works fine for me. :sunglasses:

I say go for it

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Yep, sounds good to me as well.
Could you post the lyrics? Couldn’t catch it all.