I'm In Love Again

Recently rediscovered an old love and wrote my feelings down in a song!!

https://soundcloud.com/iluvstrats/im-in-love-again

the vocals are way too High.
the vocals are way too >>>>High. <<<<< :mrgreen:

Hi man,

Nice little tune and chord sequence. Its a bit cliche but thats forgivable !!

i am not sure what key you are in (it sounds about Bb Major to me) ?? The melody note over the diminished chord (at the point i have marked on your Soundcloud page) does not sit very well (it’s the ‘A’ on Amen). If the song is in Bb, then the chord in question in E diminished and the melody note (you are singing) is D natural. KEEP the melody note but change the chord to E half diminished. So the D melody note is the 7th in the E half Hope that helps man and i like the tonic Lydian chord at the end.

Sexy chords man, hehe.

Did any body listen to the end of the song? This was just a single mic set up that I played live into.
The song is in C by the way.
If you haven’t listened to the end of the song you’re missing the best part.

The song is in C by the way.
Well i was only one key away !! i was not blessed with perfect-pitch :cry:

If you haven’t listened to the end of the song you’re missing the best part.
What you mean when the song has actually finished !! :smiley: lol

The only thing I’d change is the very last note – play a G instead of the F#

(I heard the end, BTW :sunglasses: )

Thanks Twilightsong. I’m not sure what you mean by “Play a G instead of an F#” as the last note is a C.