Recently rediscovered an old love and wrote my feelings down in a song!!
the vocals are way too High.
the vocals are way too >>>>High. <<<<<
Hi man,
Nice little tune and chord sequence. Its a bit cliche but thats forgivable !!
i am not sure what key you are in (it sounds about Bb Major to me) ?? The melody note over the diminished chord (at the point i have marked on your Soundcloud page) does not sit very well (it’s the ‘A’ on Amen). If the song is in Bb, then the chord in question in E diminished and the melody note (you are singing) is D natural. KEEP the melody note but change the chord to E half diminished. So the D melody note is the 7th in the E half Hope that helps man and i like the tonic Lydian chord at the end.
Sexy chords man, hehe.
Did any body listen to the end of the song? This was just a single mic set up that I played live into.
The song is in C by the way.
If you haven’t listened to the end of the song you’re missing the best part.
The song is in C by the way.
Well i was only one key away !! i was not blessed with perfect-pitch
If you haven’t listened to the end of the song you’re missing the best part.
What you mean when the song has actually finished !! lol
The only thing I’d change is the very last note – play a G instead of the F#
(I heard the end, BTW )
Thanks Twilightsong. I’m not sure what you mean by “Play a G instead of an F#” as the last note is a C.