An old friend of mine penned these lyrics about 10 years ago. She wrote a few songs with me way back then, and to be honest I always thought this was more of a ‘girls’ song really, but anyway I’ve just thrown a version of my own together - and tried to add some ‘balls’ to the whole thing…
Gave it a few listens; seems well balanced and well recorded. Drums seem maybe a little heavy for the overall mood, but that’s a question of taste, I guess. Seems a little low for your vocal range at times.
I agree with early21…seems to be on the low side for your voice, I think the song would sound better up a semitone or two…Kevin