Hi Jonathan,
thanks for sharing 
I like how the lead vocals sit on top of the mix, well done!
The low end could use a bit of TLC e.g. the bass is a bit too wobbly and could use a bit more definition. The snare could also be a bit more up front - that would add momentum to the song.
Okay, that’s it for now. I just wanted to break the ice and hope others chime in as well.
Nice work, mate!