think it is better now Larry, you’ve tweaked it so it sounds much more natural, less quantized.
the musical interpretation in the mix is not the matter of discussion, it sounds nice to me anyway, good job 
Thanks for the comments!
Hi Larry
Nice sounds! I wouldn’t guess that you programmed those guitar parts if you hadn’t said.
I like those bass parts too! 
Cheers
Just had a chance to listen quickly, nice track but the kick sounds a bit thin to me. I hear the beater fine but it doesn’t seem to have much low end to it.
My first listen so you have already made many changes. Sounds well constructed to me. Doug mentoned duplicating and delay and that can be magical for a rhythm guitar. All in all I like the tune. You got some great advice.
Michael