after my last shot I worked some weeks on an orchestral version of the instrumental ballad “Lake of Tears”.
Last time I got some great criticism to work with - hope it’s much better now.
I changed reverb on piano (thanks Kenny for pointing me on this - I had two reverbs in the routing path which was wrong of course).
I also added more orchestral instruments to enhance the track a tiny little bit
Thanks to Jonathan for always telling us in detail what we can do better or what is wrong or missing in the track. In my current phase of using those kind of instruments this helps a lot.
As suggested I tried to create a distinct melody with violins, flutes and viola.
Still work in progress because I’m ill and don’t hear all frequencies on my ears so I cannot finish the final mix
As always I am open for every kind of criticism that helps me to develop my skills.