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thanks for giving it a spin.
JW is a great writer, and he inspires me.
My way of saying thanks. 
Jet
"someone left the cake out in the rain " i remember hearing those lyrics and thinking what!. wichita lineman is a dream though . i think he would be chuffed with your tribute the chorus has an anthem quality ,i could hear a big choir belting it out.
Yes, as a lad of 12 at the time I also thought what?
But then you had:
“I recall the yellow cotton dress
Foaming like a wave on the ground around your knees”.
Phoenix and Wichita and Galveston…they don’t get any better than those.