Generally it sounds pretty good though I think the bass is a bit ‘toppy’ and could well do with some additional bottom end as mentioned. Overall I think the balance and feel of the mix needs to lean more toward ‘darker and broodier’. My memory of the original was that it felt kind of dark and ominous… the bass was deep, very wide (delayed L-R ?) and dominated throughout most of the mix - here your guitar sometimes dwarfs it (e.g. 2:00). Similarly with the drums… I think they too could benefit from more fat… snare a little too ‘toppy’ and toms to my taste could be beefed up a tad also. And, I thought the vocal part at 3:38 was a bit too forward as well.
I think you’re doing a good job and it’s all rather subjective of course, and these are just my initial impressions, i.e. it just needs more ‘balls’ basically