http://soundcloud.com/hans-maxus/tracinggrowls-rawcut
Comments welcome
save the trance 
Greetz Bassbase
Really good piece very listenable and tuneful. always a good thing in my book !! just maybe takes a bit long to get going…Kevin
thanks
Nice, sounds good. I did get a little impatient with the intro, it’s a bit long I think. Was hoping for a bassdrum at 34s. already
OK thanks for feedback will update soon work in progress just to less free time ;(
https://soundcloud.com/hans-maxus/tracinggrowls-rawcut2
Finally found some time any more tips tricks hints ?
Greetz Bassbase
Hi, I don’t much about this genre of music so maybe over 6 mins is ok but to me it’s still way too long, there are 3 different sections at the beginning and I think they should all be halved, the piece would be much stronger if it were shorter…I think with this kind of length you run the risk of people not listening through the whole track…I do have a leaning towards a commercial aspect of songs/instrumentals etc…so maybe I’m missing the point of this genre, otherwise a good piece…Kevin
I don’t have any affiliation with this genre either. This version 2 is definitely a step in the right direction. I see more personality in the track. That being said, towards the end does become a little monotonous. I know we all have our musical tendencies, but if this were my track, I would take out the snare from 1.09 to 1.25 to make the following part more dramatic.
These are just my opinions and preferences, not any almighty laws of songwriting.