Very nice atmospheric intro. I like the mix, and the buildup up dynamics back and forth is nice.
I’d personally like some variation on the theme though, the track is stuck on the same 2 chords, a change there would make it more interesting.
well it was kind of jazzy in the way that I played it once and then tried to change the quantized notes as little as possible. so do you like the rhuythm or not ?
I’ll try to keep them coming Thanks… perhaps I didn’t make a good intro cause the keys were written before the intro and I was trying to make the voices more familiar after the keyboard starts by the means of that intro
Hi Masoomi, I still like it a lot! When the piano comes in, the rhythm is nebulous, which leads to some confusion on where it’s going. I think I get it now. But maybe you want to quantize or otherwise straighten out the rhythm where the piano enters? Everything else seems to be tightly aligned with the rhythm grid. In any case, there’s so much to appreciate in this mix.