Started working on this a couple of months ago right before I had to take my studio down.
Definitely needs some work. As of now just vocals, bass, guitar, lap steel and a bit of drum machine.
By the way a Jinn is basically a Jeanie or something like it. Sometimes spelled Djin.
I don’t know what work you think needs to be done on this. If I were to change anything, it would be to bring the drums up just a tad. Otherwise, print it.
I really liked the lyrics on this one. Very clever As always your harmonies are excellent and the lap steel sounds great. I agree that this would sound cool with a Wurli or Rhodes. I heard a few “mouth sounds” between some of the phrases so they would need to edited out.
That’s a really nice piece of music, and the lap steel was an excellent idea, tastefully played.
There’s a certain vulnerability in your vocal delivery that hinted at Neil Young, even though you
don’t really sound like him.
Please post again if you add more - I’d love to hear this develop, if you choose to build on it.