Instrumentation and vibe sound cool. I think their are intonation issues with the vocals. Specifically “Whenever I’m alone…” . Various time when that comes in as well as a few other phrases need attention
Just quickly speaking about the strings. They’re panned too far left and right for a start, you need to know how 1st violins, 2nd violins, violas and cellos are actually positioned for a recording. The strings aren’t well balanced left/right anyway and that’s down to the writing of the parts. The violas/cellos that are to the right are barely audible, which I’ve seen quite common and I used to do it myself when I was learning and that’s purely down a lack of confidence with writing for strings.
Some nice ideas in there, still alot of changes to be made in the writing to make it more of a solid and complete piece of music. Also mixing stuff like pre-delays differing for sections to give them a sense of space in the recording instead of everything all sounding like they are sat directly on top of each other 
Well done so far.
Very good…that’s good advice regarding the strings…Kevin