Hi there,
Here’s a new track, i hope you like it.
Thanks everyone for listening.
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This is nice. It’s well played and produced, and the composition is good. That said, it does go on for quite some time without much variation. If this was purely a soundtrack for the included images, that’s definitely okay. If on the other hand, the music is the “main” thing, I’d recommend thinking about a few changes here and there regarding dynamics and/or some more variations to the song structure.
Please don’t take this as too strong of a criticism. It’s simply my impression over the 5 minutes of the track and video. Nicely done in all other technical ways. Good luck, and have fun.
John
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I thank you for the always valuable advice, they help me to grow, I always appreciate the advice, especially from those who are more experienced and qualified. Thank you very much again. 
Hi. Very good melodies. I liked it