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Hi guys I’m looking for feedback on my track before I mix it in Dolby-atmos https://soundcloud.com/sheriff-vlogs/wow-01/s-8PFkl3TpfaP?si=3e29f91c1c8a4006b6591331f816d1ac&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

https://soundcloud.com/sheriff-vlogs/click-clap-1/s-G7Z7zLpInlm?si=45c4d3f6bf134eb29cd8092257d9a048&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharin

I’m still learning how to produce music I’m been doing it on and off for a couple of years now. One of my main goals was to release royalty free music / finish setting up my website from January which hasn’t happened yet. For the tracks I was using scaler recording it into an audio I’m trying to avoid using midi track I prefer audio than midi. Whan I’m producing most of the time I get ear fatigue and start to lose perspective and some times get bored of the track or something that I thought was cool isn’t good anymore. I allso notice when I add stuff things start to become a mess I’m trying to limit the amount of stuff I add in a track. Any tips on how to improve on the tracks / work quickly would be appreciated.
I’m trying to release music before end of the year or one track a month. thanks

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Sounds ok mate, the only thing it lacks is a top line melody.

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Is it in both track i did listen to it on sounds cloud and i mad some notes which is

Wow-01 1:43 fix the breakdown it transitions abruptly remove elements one by one or change sound or find a sample loop.

Ckick clap 1:52 change variation / remove pad.
Maybe find a new rhythm slash sound for the main Melody.

End of track finish abruptly.

And maybe change mid / sub bass depending on melody or main sound.

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In my humble opinion my friend both tracks sound like excellent backing tracks for a song, just need a song.

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ok, thanks Which track needs a top-line melody?
at what time in the track and for how long.