Track for remix contest finished.

Hi I just finish my remix for some kind of contest.
How it sounds?
I use wavelab elements 9 mastering tools

https://soundcloud.com/kosmokrator-1/noforix-no-disclosure-cosmic-rain-remix

Sounds good. I like that massive basses and rock elements implemented. But it is too long. It’s hard to wait 8 minutes to reach the end of “story”.