great song ,very good vocals, the instrumentation is great ,stuff going off all over but not too much ,i would have liked to have heard a mandolin in there maybe doing the piano line on the chorus a bit like led zeppelins battle of evermore ,although it may have become too stringy then i dont know ,great stuff.
Hi Ian, vox sounded a bit low in the mix in places…production, instrumentation and arrangement up to your usual standard…wish I could get to that level, just can’t do it
Thanks! I think I can honestly say… I have never ever used a mandolin in a tune before! Hmmm… Now there’s an idea…
Thanks Kev. Vox levels… gosh that’s a debate I’ve been caught up in a lot over the years. I was recently (last year) criticized because the listener in question thought I mixed my vocals way too high in the mix. It’s one of those things you just can’t win!
Oh… right… yeah I know exactly what you mean… a woman.
Thats a cool song , potentially there could’ve been a mandolin or maybe even a banjoline in there. I’m only starting out in the world of producing, so I isn’t sY anything about that. Generally though great sound
Catchy song, I think the mandolin in mention is because the song have a kind of R.E.M. feel.
I don’t think the level is low but you can do maybe a little trick with the vocal to get it a little bit more in “your face”, like some kind of gentle distortion or saturation.
I guess I forgot to comment before, but I did listen to this a number of times, and I like it. I don’t want to say the words resonate with me, in case my significant other is reading this. I like the mix and the arrangement. Not to say you couldn’t add a mandolin…
Awesome songwriting and production Sherz! I’m dabbling more in production now myself and I can appreciate your arrangement choices panning call & response vocals. Each instrument has it’s own space with great eq and pan decisions yet is still cohesive. Any comments I would make would just be to taste a little more low end compression perhaps.
I immediately made the R.E.M. comparison which is a high compliment imo.
You know I suppose it all depends on one’s perspective…I’m certain R.E.M. wishes their fans still bought CD’s so they had the same income they had in their heyday.
I do… I still have some! And in fact I still burn my tunes to CD for in car listening/evaluation as I don’t actually have digital capability in my car. But also, I like to burn an album to CD… even if it’s just the one disc, just for me to hold - then it feels and looks like a ‘proper’ album! A bunch of tracks on a website just doesn’t feel like an album to me…