definitely better than my first effort
It feels like the song drags a little, probably because of the long breaks between lines combined with the slow tempo.
I think the vocal should be a bit stronger in the refrains, it needs to carry the refrain, currently it’s mostly the piano doing that.
About the piano, it sits quite well in the mix, but in the intro when it plays alone it sounds very thin. If you used EQ to fit it in the mix, then maybe reduce/bypass that EQ in the intro. It somehow sounds better to me in the outtro, maybe because I’m used to it by then