I wonder if I’ve become so used to large hall/cathedral reverbs that some things sound too dry to my ears. D: As it happens, I thought that overall the track could use a lot more reverb and/or a different one. The instruments are fairly sparse, and especially with the staccato parts they just sound way too dry to me.
I think my main criticism, as it usually is about things, is lack of a main hook/melody. Now, you do have that and I like the punctuation of the rhythm of it but to me introducing it at 2:30 is a rather long wait and it isn’t featured for very long either considering it should be the main selling point of the track to the listener. I’d personally prefer it early on to gain my interest as a listener earlier on and then build in layers/dynamics as it progresses.
Good start but I’d suggest adding more layers and textures in there as it progresses as it just sounds too thin and sparse. I get that it’s supposed to be chilled but can have chilled and layered too.