the bass is certainly big thru my system here and could do with some
bottom reduction. Given its prominence in the
arrangement it grabs as much attention as any of the lead parts.
The kick is not defined, and at times I was struggling to even detect it.
The lead lines, especially the first synth one, could be lowered in volume
I think and I don’t think insufficient “air” is a problem. Rather, I’d be
shaving it off those parts as they got a bit razory after a while.
The drums and riddum guitar are clearly quite roomy, but the lead
parts aren’t. Not necessarily a bad thing of course, but it does make
them stand a tad more proud in the mix so I found myself quite aware
I was listening to overdubs rather than something seductively organic.
Hope that makes sense.
I could comment on the composition and arrangement, but not sure if
you want remarks along those lines.
Hope some of this feedback is helpful!