Simple instrumental recording - ‘Dreadnought Em Chorus’

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Oneway, You have a super interesting basis for an instrumental piece or a song that deserves to be a little more elaborate.

On the other hand, there seems to be a lead guitar which actually sounds more like background noise than a score that we want to put forward.

I like the mood of this one and there’s something cool about it. Put the time and rigor into it to make it a good piece.

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Yeah, what Rene_L said, the piece has potential, needs a vocal.

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I have a singing voice that no one would want to hear. LOL :grinning:

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Thanks for the feedback.
It interesting how the volume levels of tracks can change when mixed to MP3. I have remixed the song several times and initially the lead guitar parts were too dominant. Posting it on here the lead parts are a bit in the background as you say. I’ve been recording for many years but only used Cubase for about a year so it’s been a learning curve to learn this DAW. Still much I have still got to learn.
I always record in 24 bit 48 kHz so had to mix down to 44.1 to get the file size small enough for this forum.

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This is pretty simple, as you have it here. I do agree that it could become the basis for something with a bit more time. One suggestion I’d make is to play around a bit with the bass. Leave a little space here and there. That might make it breathe a little bit.
Good luck with it, and have fun!
John

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Thanks for your feed back :+1:

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I think everyone’s made good comments on this one. I might add, you don’t have to sing, I certainly never do, but you ought to have a melody, which you can pay on a guitar, or any instrument, really. Will look forward to your next version.