Hi everyone! Been busy with work and dropped this for a while. Some of you said my vocals were pitchy and the “achilles heel” of the song. So, i worked on the pitchy parts (i think) and wanted to see if it’s better. Also, any feedback on the overall mix and song is great too!
Thanks everyone!!
I think the vocals sound good. Very contemporary sound. The mix is really good for me.
It’s still really good. I don’t remember issues with the vocals, they sound good to me. Nice tight mix.
Good sound…good song…good vocal…reminiscent of Echo and the bunnymen IMHO…Kevin
well i didn’t hear your first post but i dont hear anything wrong with your vocals here and your a good enough singer to make me wonder how bad it could have been.
i liked it, both of them, butterfly kisses seemed a bit short though, i was just getting into it then it was done
cheers
Thanks everyone! I realized after posting this, that the comment about my vox were made on another forum. I think he was messing with me, which is funny because it worked! I’ve been tripping since he said it because I just couldn’t hear the
“pitchy” parts that “ruined” the song. Whatever. 
Hornyscotsman: I did butterfly kisses for someone who made a video to raise awareness for their sick daughter. It had to be a short song.
Have a great day everyone! Thanks for always helping me out! Perhaps someday I’ll know enough to be of some use to some of you!
BB
This is a great sounding track.
+1
This wouldn’t sound misplaced on contemporary radio! 
Nice one. I like your vocals.
Thanks everyone! 
Really good track better than cake lol great playing and mix all the way around.
Nice, sounds good to me!
I remember hearing it before, probably an older version because it wasn’t as good in my memory 
Nice work!
Hey Brett,
Good to see you back!
Mix sounds pretty darn good.
But, I’m gonna be a bit of a party pooper and say theres stll some bass resonance on that ‘B’ note, sorry 
In my old cheap cans, it’s not so much of a problem, but my new ones, it does stand out a fair bit.
No one else has mentioned it, so it might not be much of a real problem.
However, I’m in an 
mood and thought I would say something, you know, just to spoil your day 
Just kidding, hope all is good your way!
Sav
I like the mix too. All in all it sounds very good to me.
I like how the vocals were doubled at around 0:48 just before the chorus. However, I think there really are some slight issues with pitch in the part starting at 0:55 (e.g. “throw it all away” does not sound quite right to me). To me it seems that you are struggling a bit with this part and it sounds a bit forced at places. When the same part is repeated later in the song, I would guess that you have copy-pasted the same earlier take here too.
I like how the end builds up.
It’s a nice recording, and well played, but that guitar pattern/voicing has been done to death the last few years